Young gun

This was very nice.Keep writing poems like these. All the best with your future writing.

what exactly is "bumping" threads?

Sometimes you may not get too many reviews if your work is just perfect.High views and low reviews is fine.

a short poem.

Thank you all for your reviews.They were very helpful.

The sound of a hundred strings, Soothing melody of the autumn springs, Would soon fill the empty silence of the auditorium As the Master musician got ready for the act. ...

Frank, clear and no-nonsense is what this is about. That girl” is gone. "That girl" is creating her own life. Not many times do I come across such resolves in ...

Quite good for a start.

This is really confusing. The writer should make up her mind if she hates or likes him.But people in love often behave kind of strange, so that might explain things. ...

9/10 Though the sun is better than rain.

Its a poem on career choice confusion.

I liked the way the poem folds as a story from the beginning to the end. This is among one of the few pieces that I can say are perfect ...

This poem brings mixed reactions. What is not clear,as it is many times, is why the other person was not let into her life and how excessively farsighted the narrator ...

I'm not quite good at guessing the hidden meanings in a poem but I'll give this a try. It would be the narrator's jealousy towards happy couples.Thought the poem the ...

More than a poem, this sounded like friendship day text messages put together.Sounds like some similar quotes selected from an Internet site. What is not needed is use words like ...